Alright, Ive been listening to quite a few of your tracks now and I can almost certainly guess where you draw most of your inspiration from X) but yeah, I really like what you're doing so I'm following to see what happens in the future. ;D
Now for the review.
This is pretty decent for a one night stand, it's also quite identifiable as a one night stand as the whole thing feels very monotone and repetitive. However Its quite hard to come up with a ton of different Ideas In one sitting so ill cut you a bit of slack there.
You worked on this track for 8 hours and its only about two minutes long which tells me you either focused a lot on mixing with this track as well or you're just the worlds best procrastinator (Doubt you could beat me there though). Everything sounds clean and well put together though so I don't think any of that time went to waste.
Overall good job, It could have sounded better with a bit more variation in tone (mostly my opinion). But otherwise this is pretty solid :) keep it up.
(also my reviews tend to be quite long so get used to it ;P)